Thursday, June 30, 2011
An Excerpt from The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros
"We didn't always live on Mango Street. Before that we lived on Loomis on the third floor, and before that we lived on Keeler. Before Keeler it was Paulina, and before that I can't remember. But what I remember most is moving a lot. Each time it seemed there'd be one more of us. By the time we got to Mango Street we were six - Mama, Papa, Carlos, Kiki, my sister Nenny and me.
The house on Mango Street is ours and we don't have to pay rent to anybody or share the yard with the people downstairs or be careful not to make too much noise and there isn't a landlord banging on the ceiling. But even so it's not the house we'd thought we'd get.
We had to leave the flat on Loomis quick. The water pipes broke and the landlord wouldn't fix them. We were using the washroom next door and carrying water over in empty milk gallons. That's why Mama and Papa looked for a house, and that's why we moved into the house on Mango Street, far away, on the other side of town.
Our parents always told us that one day we would move into a house, a real house that would be ours for always so we wouldn't have to move each year. And our house would have running water and pipes that worked. And inside it would have real stairs, not hallway stairs, but stairs inside like the houses on T.V. And we'd have a basement and at least three washrooms so when we took a bath we wouldn't have to tell everybody. Our house would be white with trees around it, a great big yard and grass growing without a fence. This was the house Papa talked about when he held a lottery ticket and this was the house Mama dreamed up in the stories she told us before we went to bed."
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I think it was effective word choice for the author to include all of the street names to help the reader visualize how often the family moved.
ReplyDeleteListing the specific names of the streets helps the reader to visualize the family bouncing around.
ReplyDelete"landlord banging on the ceiling" good word choice
"carrying water over in empty milk gallons" helps the reader to understand and visualize
using the word "real" repeatedly in the last paragraph helps the reader understand how important this house is to the narrator.